Saturday, April 14, 2012

55 Word Story

The Wordsmith panel at RavenCon today was enjoyable and useful, and once I stepped out of it, I had some ideas, too, about more I can do with Ax here at home.

In the meantime - my five minute and fifty second 55-word story.


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"I must, and yet am paralyzed."

He looked at the boy, eyes so deep, and put his palm on his tender breast.

How to obey ...  He was lost.  Those deep and trusting eyes.  Twice, he raised the blade.

"Oh, G-d," he breathed.



The ram came into the clearing as the angel's voice whispered to him ...

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